Good use of spreadsheet to display numerical data. The description for heat transfer is basic but accurate. The diagrams have been labelled correctly. The text for the exercises is in general well written and appears to be accurate. Honestly did you copy and paste or was is it all synthesised from a text book? Either way you should reference immediately after the text. The cooling system service is again far to accurate. You should have been more general. For instance during the final steps, bleed system if required. You could have also identified different hose clips. Look, copy and paste has to stop. Thanks for the links. I can immediately see where the information has come from. You cannot continue down this road.
Good use of spreadsheet to display numerical data. The description for heat transfer is basic but accurate. The diagrams have been labelled correctly. The text for the exercises is in general well written and appears to be accurate. Honestly did you copy and paste or was is it all synthesised from a text book? Either way you should reference immediately after the text.
ReplyDeleteThe cooling system service is again far to accurate. You should have been more general. For instance during the final steps, bleed system if required. You could have also identified different hose clips.
Look, copy and paste has to stop. Thanks for the links. I can immediately see where the information has come from. You cannot continue down this road.
Good work. Well written and described text.
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